1.21.11

on Jan 21, 2011

Steam from the neighbor’s
rooftop vent briefly obscures
the morning moon.

or this

Steam from the neighbor’s
rooftop vent briefly obscures
the now-waning wolf moon.

I came up with this first thing this morning. I composed it in the text editor as I usually do, and then posted the first version here where it cross-posts to Twitter. Then, after some interruption, I cut-and-pasted the second, revised version to Identi.ca and Facebook, thinking I had posted the same thing to both places. I’m not even sure which one I meant to be the final, but I like the second one better. So now they’re both here.